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Monday, July 28, 2014

The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle: Read, Chapter XII


Welcome back to this read of The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle, where we examine the techniques a successful author uses to create a great and compelling story.

To review or catch up on previous posts and to see reads of other books, click here.

Enjoy!

SPOILERS!

Chapter XII

Summary: After learning where Haggard has trapped the unicorns and seeing the possibility that the Lady Amalthea has wept, Schmendrick and Molly go to the great hall with Amalthea to find the way to the Red Bull. According to the cat’s prophesy, they first attempt to make a skull in the hall speak. Schmendrick tries spell after spell, growing more and more desperate. Nothing works, so he raises his fist to smash the thing and yells at it. This persuades the skull to instantly acquire the gift of gab.

But the skull, an old henchman of Haggard’s, is far from helpful and thoroughly enjoys taunting and frustrating the living. He refuses to answer how to reach the Red Bull and laughs cruelly at them. At last, irritated, Schmendrick turns away. Perhaps, the skull speaking is all that’s required.

Next, he must somehow get wine to drink itself. However, despite Molly’s scouring efforts, they’ve found no wine at all in the castle. Instead, she brought a flask of water, confident that Schmendrick could turn it to wine. This catches the skull’s interest and it begs to be allowed to see what’s going on with the wine. Schmendrick turns his back on the skull and conceals his desperate efforts.

At last, Schmendrick comes up with a flask with the faintest aroma of wine. He tries to taste it and finds the flank empty. Furious, he makes to throw the flask, smashing it, but the skull protests and begs for the wine. Though it has no tongue, it imagines the taste of the wine and claims it can appreciate it far more than any living person. Schmendrick bargains with it, the wine for the way to the Red Bull.

The skull explains that you must go through the clock in the great hall, which never strikes the right time. Schmendrick checks the information by attempting to walk through the clock. Nothing happens and he bumps his nose. The skull explains that it doesn’t matter what time the clock strikes. Time is irrelevant. Whatever time it is is the right time. Grasping the concept somewhat, Schmendrick tips up the the flask and the skull drinks the nonexistent wine with great contentment.

Then the skull says Schmendrick should smash it. When Schmendrick refuses, the skull yells for Haggard. In the midst of this, the skull realizes that Lady Amalthea is a unicorn and becomes genuinely frantic in his alarm. Haggard and his men-at-arms race to stop them, and Schmendrick, Molly, and Amalthea race for the clock.

Amalthea slips through the clock without a problem. Molly swiftly follows, and they find themselves in a dark, cold place. A moment later, Prince Lir appears and rebukes Amalthea for going on without him. For the first time in the entire chapter, she speaks and assures him that she would return to him. He says with grave surety that he knows she wouldn’t ever return.

Moments later, Schmendrick appears with blood running down from his temple. He fought his way through the men-at-arms before he could finally enter the clock. Then, from a distance, they hear Haggard cry out in triumph and smash the clock. Their way back is sealed shut forever. Now, the only way out is through the Red Bull’s way.

Writer Comments: There are two primary lessons to take from this chapter. First is the use of sensory details. Second is the use of increasing tension. So let’s take a closer look at them individually.

Sensory Detail: A writer should always strive to include rich details in fiction. However, sensory details, those that utilize what the characters feel, see, hear, taste, and smell, are particularly visceral. As such, they’re especially helpful in making a story come alive.

In this instance, Beagle makes good use of sensory description. The visual details are all over the place, but that’s perhaps the easiest for most writers. However, Beagle utilizes other senses. For example, the smell and taste of wine, the sound of skittering creatures and the skull’s voice, ominous footsteps and breathing as Haggard approaches, the cold, the palpable dark, hitting one’s nose against a clock. All these are specific, vivid details that give the scene life and add to the tension.

To make the most of these details though, they need to be precise and specific. Don’t just say the flask at last smelled of wine. Do something like what Beagle does to convey the scent:

“You understand,” he said, interrupting himself, “it won’t be anything special. Vin ordinaire, if that.” Molly nodded solemnly. Schmendrick said, “And it’s usually too sweet; and how I’m supposed to get it to drink itself, I haven’t the faintest idea.” He took up the incantation again, even more softly, while the skull complained bitterly that it couldn’t see or hear anything. Molly said something quiet and hopeful to the Lady Amalthea, who neither looked at her nor replies. 

The chant stopped abruptly, and Schmendrick raised the flask to his lips. He sniffed at it first, muttering, “Weak, weak, hardly any bouquet at all. Nobody ever made good wine by magic.” (page 195-196)

All of that builds the scent and flavor of the wine. It layers specific detail upon specific detail, relying on action, dialogue, and description to paint an exact sensation for the reader. Think of how your characters experience a sensation, and relay it in those terms. That will help build it for your reader and safeguard it against being dry.

Tension: This one we’ve covered before, but it’s such a crucial element to fiction. Today , though, I want to look at it through the context of sensory detail.

The advantage of sensory details for building tension is that they come automatically with immediacy. Tension is an imminent threat to the characters. Visceral sensory details act like footsteps as the danger draws nearer. Each takes the reader a closer step to potential disaster. Each pulls the reader deeper into the scene and able to care more about what might happen.

Naturally, you still need to have something at stake that’s being threatened, but use other writing tools, like sensory details, to heighten it.

Thank you for joining me for today’s chapter of The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle. We’ll resume this read next Monday. Until then, swing back by on Friday for further forays into books, the speculative, and life.

Friday, July 25, 2014

Sneak Peek: Jade’s Spirit by Jessi Gage

Today I have the honor of sharing one of my most favorite books that I’ve had the chance to see before its release, Jade’s Spirit by Jessi Gage, coming out August 1st. Check it out.


When exotic dancer Jade seeks refuge from an abusive boyfriend in her grandmother’s aging Victorian home, she finds she’s not the only houseguest. A dream-invading incubus has taken up residence, and it wants Jade’s soul. Fortunately, a flirtatious lawn-care provider has a trick or two up his sleeve for dealing with hauntings. And he has definite rebound-guy potential—if only he would stop inviting her to church.

The virginity vow Emmett "the lawn guy" Herald took when he was seventeen has become legendary in Dover, Vermont. Ten years later, everyone is waiting to see if he’ll blow a decade of “waiting for marriage” now that he’s dating the new girl from the big city. Even Emmett thinks he has met his match in the vivacious Boston beauty. In fact, he’s starting to think virginity may be overrated.

A spark of attraction ignites between Jade and Emmett, and quickly grows into a roaring inferno. But with a demon fanning the flames, attraction has never been so perilous.

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Monday, July 21, 2014

The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle: Read, Chapter XI


Welcome back to this read of The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle. Here, we look into this classic work of fantasy to gain insights into what elements create a great book. To catch up or review previous parts of this read, click here.

Enjoy!

SPOILERS!

Chapter XI

Summary: Prince Lir returns from another heroic deed, but this time, he does not present the spoils of his work to the Lady Amalthea. Instead, he decides that he will love her from afar and seek nothing of her except some small chance that he might be of use to her. Molly encourages him in this endeavor.

Then, he chances to meet her on the stairs and captures her with his gaze as he has learned to capture many creatures. She confesses to being confused and having a horrid nightmare where she’s locked in a cage and there’s an old woman and a bird and she has four legs like a beast. Lir is horrified at this but seeks to soothe her. He pleads to be of some use, so she asks him to sing to her and gives him the first smile she has bestowed upon him. She bids him to sing so that all the nightmares and this thing that wants her to remember it will go away.

All winter and into what pitiful season Haggard’s kingdom calls summer, the Lady Amalthea and Prince Lir fall deeply in love. They sing together. They picnic in the castle. Everything, though the castle is weighed down with darkness, dreariness, and witchery, is like spring to them.

Meanwhile, Molly and Schmendrick slave away for Haggard, too weary and overworked to solve the riddle the cat gave about how to get to the Red Bull’s lair.

Then, one day, the Lady Amalthea watches from a tower as Prince Lir returns from another great feat. King Haggard comes upon her and challenges her. He confesses to knowing who she really is, and when she pleads ignorance, demands that she not dare deny herself. He will have her. If she loves a little longer, he will have her. He confesses to having known who she was from the beginning and about how he once saw a pair of unicorns. They were the only things ever to bring him joy, so he told the Red Bull--who follows him only because he has no fear--that he wanted them. One by one, the Red Bull rounded them up for Haggard and drove them into the sea. There, they remain imprisoned, terrified to step foot onto the shore lest the Red Bull get them.

The tide turns, and he bids her to see the unicorns as the waves break against the shore. For once, his voice and manner are young. For once, his face radiates joy. And then he looks at her and sees that there are no longer green leaves in her eyes. He threatens to hurl her from the tower with his own hands if she has forgotten herself. She closes her eyes before him, and at last, he departs.

Then she hears Schmendrick reassuring her that it’s over. He has heard all Haggard said and now knows where the unicorns have been hidden. When she turns to him, he sees moisture on her face and says,

“I hope that’s spray. If you’ve become human enough to cry, then no magic in the world--oh, it must be spray. Come with me. It had better be spray.” (page 189)

Writer Comments: This chapter covers an extended period of time. It covers several scenes, some quite brief, and it unfurls a crucial turning point for the unicorn. That’s a lot to cram into one chapter, which begs the question: What should comprise a chapter?

There are many answers to this, and undoubtedly, you can find pages of opinion if you search online or get a group of writers together to discuss it. However, I think, amidst all the various definitions, that there is one crucial element that must define a chapter, every chapter, of a story: shift.

What is shift? Simply, it is a slight or dramatic alteration in the characters and story. Something must change to raise the stakes or reveal a new layer of the mystery. A new development must come up. A new question must arise. Something must change.

This chapter is all about the change in Lady Amalthea from being the unicorn to embracing her human side and fleeing her unicorn self. Beagle takes us from the moment she takes that first real step by accepting Lir, demonstrates how extensively she turns from her true self, to the point where she is on the brink of losing herself completely. In real time, this takes months, but Beagle can’t afford to drag the description of it out and risk boring his readers or at least getting sidetracked. Instead, he highlights the change, the shift, in one powerful chapter.

For stories to be dynamic, they must make small alterations that result in the overall big change that results in the climax. To accomplish this, a writer must make something shift in each chapter and in each scene for that matter. If nothing shifts, take a good hard look at what’s written. It almost certainly needs cutting or rewriting.

Thank you for joining me for this read of Peter S. Beagle’s The Last Unicorn. We’ll resume this read on Monday. Until then, swing back by on Friday for a sneak peak at Jessi Gage’s Jade’s Spirit, an awesome book about a haunting, hope, love, and redemption.

Friday, July 18, 2014

Animal Companions in Fiction

Yesterday, my family got two new puppies named Sven and Elsa. They’re brother and sister Border Collie/German Shepherd Mixes and naturally adorable. So, last night, when I was supposed to be thinking up a topic for today, all I had on my brain was puppies. They are after all, for all their fun, a lot of work. Since I couldn’t get dogs out of my head, I figured I might as well find a way to apply them to today’s post: animal companions in fiction.

We’ve all read stories involving animal companions. Sometimes, the story is all about the animal, like in Fred Gipson’s Old Yeller. Sometimes, the animal companion is merely the faithful steed of a hero, like Bella in Robert Jordan’s The Wheel of Time series. Bella, for example, was never a major element of the story, but she endeared herself to many fans. Sometimes, the animals are great beasts with mighty powers as in Mercedes Lackey’s Heralds of Valdemar series. And sometimes, they are as average as dirt, though still highly entertaining, just as in John Erickson’s Hank the Cowdog series. Whether it’s children’s fiction or great literary works, animal companions have a long tradition and have left a powerful print in fiction.

Their uses in fiction are sometimes obvious. Perhaps the story revolves around them and the conflict directly includes them. But in many other instances, animal companions serve more subtle purposes.

Revelation of Human Characters: Let’s face it, we all say things to our pets that we’d never dare say to our fellow man. And how we treat the animals in our lives says a lot about us as people. Fictional characters are no different. A pet or animal companion can reveal layers about your other characters. What are they really thinking that they reveal to the cat who they feed? What sort of person are they really when it comes to how they care for their bird or gryphon? What weaknesses or hidden strengths does the presence of an animal, fantastical or mundane, reveal in their lives?

Humor and Catastrophe: Let’s face another fact, pets make messes, get into mischief, and add humor to life. Just because dogs are like this doesn’t mean your character’s pet unicorn has to be different. Animals in a story can add much needed levity, and the catastrophes they bring, when done well, can highlight story elements or simply heighten tension or stakes.

Foreshadowing, Instinct, and Pointing the Way: Animals tend to be much better than us at sensing danger, whether or not a person is to be trusted, or any number of other things. If your hero’s dog, who is normally quite sweet, starts growling at the guy sitting on the park bench, it tips your readers off that they need to be concerned about the guy on the park bench. Animal companions can be an avenue for revealing and hinting to readers in ways that your heroes could never manage.

Adding Grandeur: Especially when animal companions come in fantastical form, they serve the purpose of add something beyond the norm to a story. It can be anything, purity of the unicorn, mighty strength of the gryphon, or unsettling savagery of the manticore. Animal companions expand setting in a dynamic way. They can make a story and its world that much more.

Mirroring Theme: If your story’s theme is about loyalty, a dog can help highlight this. Another type of animal can too, but dogs are renowned for their loyalty. Either way, consider your themes. How can an animal in the life of your protagonist highlight those themes?

Relatable: Most of us have owned a pet. All of us know someone who has. Animals are a part of everyday life, and therefore, they are something everyone can relate to. They’re an additional way for readers to connect with a story and its characters.

There are but a few ways animal companions play a part in stories. And then, there’s always one last reason: they’re cool.


What other uses to animal companions serve in stories? What are some of your favorite stories with animal companions?

Monday, July 14, 2014

The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle: Read, Chapter X


Welcome back to this read of The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle, where we examine what techniques an author uses to compose a successful book. To catch up or review previous reads, click here.

Enjoy!

SPOILERS!

Chapter X

Summary: In the scullery of Haggard’s castle, Molly cooks and Prince Lir begs her counsel, desperate for answers about why the Lady Amalthea remains unmoved. Despite all his efforts and great deeds, from dragon slaying to maiden rescue and enough other things for the likes of two dozen great heroes, Lady Amalthea barely even acknowledges he exists. Molly advises acts of courtesy and kindness rather than great deed, and Lir confesses that he only wants to be whatever it is the Lady Amalthea most needs.

Too, he shares a story with Molly about how Lady Amalthea reacted when she learned his horse was burned by the most recent dragon he killed. She rushed to the horse and laid her hands on it as if she expected her touch to heal it. When nothing happened, she fled, crying without tears. Lir cannot fathom this, and Molly cannot fully explain that the real reason for Lady Amalthea’s sorrow is because she’s a unicorn.

Then the Lady Amalthea descends into the scullery. Lir immediately murmurs about a village he must save from an ogre and hurries off. Lady Amalthea sits and tries to beckon the cat Molly fed to come to her. While the creature trembles with desire to yield to her call, he refuses to come within range of her touch.

Molly informs Lady Amalthea that she is cruel to Lir, and she responds that cruelty, like kindness, is for mortals. Too, she dare not acknowledge Lir. He drags dragon heads to her when she won’t acknowledge him, what would he do if she did? And then, she reveals to Molly that the Lady Amalthea has become her own entity, and sometimes she cannot even remember why they came to Haggard’s castle. Gently, Molly reminds she came to look for unicorns and to free them, that she is the last unicorn.

The castle’s men-at-arms come down for the supper, and the Lady Amalthea leaves. These men are old, past seventy and more, and they confess to Molly that the really serve Haggard because he wishes it. Whatever Haggard wishes, the Red Bull enforces, so in truth, they are prisoners of the Bull. Before they depart, the eldest tells Molly that the Lady Amalthea should not remain at the castle, for when she arrived her beauty made the castle beautiful, but now her beauty has turned the castle darker and more vicious.

Then the cat Molly feeds and pets begins to speak. He tells Molly that he dared not let the unicorn touch him because, if he had, he would cease to be his own and belong to her. He also tells Molly that there isn’t much time before the Lady Amalthea takes over and the unicorn fades away entirely. Their only hope is to take the king’s way down to the Red Bull, and he gives her a riddle about how to get there because, after all, he is a cat and cats never give anyone a straight answer.

Writer Comments: Beagle has a number of story challenges by the time he got to this chapter. He had to show that quite a bit of time had passed without dwelling on it and slowing down the story. He had to reveal a ton of information in a way that would be impactful and interesting. He had to set up the coming story’s resolution. And he had to do all of this in a way that felt natural and believable. So we end up with a chapter composed of four conversations and centered around the one character who can perceive and feel it all.

Let’s look at each conversation separately and how it works to accomplish what Beagle and the story need.

Conversation with Prince Lir: Lir goes from the kindhearted boy we saw previously to a kindhearted hero of great courage, strength, and accomplishment. In many stories, an author might have stretched this out and revealed some of the steps Lir took on this transition, but such is unnecessary for this story because the story is not about Lir. The conversation instead gives a sense of how much time has passed and gives us a context to see what the unicorn’s life has been like, to some small extent, in the interim.  Too, it makes Lir more of a player in the tale.

Conversation with Lady Amalthea/the unicorn: This particular conversation is the one that jerks our emotions and tugs at our sympathies. We see first hand that Amalthea is still the unicorn, then see that she is slipping, forgetting herself. Beagle has Molly describe her eyes as changing from the unfathomable depths of the unicorn’s to a human woman’s which are definable. This in itself is quite frightening, and through it, we see the stakes of the story rise. We see that, despite the fact all this time has passed, things will soon change one way or another. We glimpse the possibility of catastrophe.

Conversation with the men-at-arms: Primarily, this conversation is all about information gathering. Beagle needed to let Molly and his readers know that there is a way down to the Red Bull and that even the men-at-arms see that Lady Amalthea is in trouble.

Conversation with the cat: Long before now, Beagle established that animals in this world could talk. Before now, they talked only to the unicorn, but even if it’s to a human one speaks, the unicorn’s presence is what drives it to loquaciousness. The cat verifies what the men-at-arms say, what the unicorn fears, what Molly sees, and what we readers suspect. The unicorn has very little time, and she must confront the Red Bull. And then we and Molly are given the way, but of course it can’t be too easy. Instead, it is couched in riddle and mystery. It is couched to seem impossible, for wine must drink itself, a skull must speak, and a clock that is always wrong must strike the right time. Here, Beagle turns the story toward its final path to the climax.

This is, in short, a transition chapter, and transitions are one of the most difficult things to write because they court boredom and tediousness. In short, they should still move a story along in some way, increase stakes, and contain conflict. Just because it’s transition doesn’t mean it shouldn’t follow the usual rules of fiction.

Thank you for joining me for this read of The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle. We’ll resume this read next Monday. Until then, swing back by on Friday for further forays into fiction, the speculative, and life.

Friday, July 11, 2014

What You Need Before Writing a Story

Whether you’re a pantser or plotter, every story needs a few key ingredients to ensure it has a solid structure and base appeal. It helps to gather these ingredients before writing.

Some of you, the pantsers out there, may argue that planning beforehand ruins writing or limits you. As a pantser myself, I understand the fear of restricting the subconscious and the knowledge that lots of planning can feel like a waste of time the instant the muse insists on derailing, which tends to happen a lot. But even I have come to understand that, as writers, we need to set a few foundational stones before we let our muses fully loose.

These things will help you ensure a more solid story, whether you enjoy plotting or not:

  1. A protagonist: Who is the story about.
  2. The protagonist’s goal or objective: What does he want and why does he want it. His trying to achieve this goal forms the backbone of your story.
  3. An antagonist: This can be a character or an element like a hurricane or loneliness, but there must be something opposing your protagonist.
  4. Conflict: What is keeping your protagonist from achieving his objective? This comes from the antagonist, but other things can get in the way too. Remember, conflict is what drives a story, so make sure that there is a main conflict from which all the rest of the story and other smaller conflicts can hang.
  5. An inciting incident: What is that interesting point that kicks the story off. Remember, this doesn’t need to include backstory and explanation. All it needs, and thus what your story’s beginning needs, is that event that starts your protagonist on quest to overcome the conflict you’ve decided on.
  6. A midpoint: What thing will change at about the middle of the story? This is a major shift. You don’t have to know what it will be in a lot of detail, but having at least a vague concept helps.
  7. A climax: Like the midpoint, you don’t have to know how the story will resolve in great detail, but you should have some concept of how your protagonist and antagonist will ultimately resolve the conflict.
  8. Permission to write whatever makes your story zing with passion, humor, fear, or whatever other emotion you wish: Remember, all you have to do is get a fully story draft down. If you let your walls down and those driving emotions in, you’ll have a more gripping draft. This isn’t the time for perfection. It’s the time to get a story’s true essence on the page.
  9. Other major plot points: It’s often helpful to come up with a few more major turning points in the plot. Then you can play connect the dots with your story. The dots can be far apart, but at least, you’ll have a distant point to aim for. It helps when avoiding needless detours.

There are, of course, more detailed descriptions of how to deliver a solid, impactful story, but these are you most basic. If you struggle to get stories on paper, try figuring these things out. You may surprise yourself. If everything in you rebels at the idea of deciding on anything before writing, you still might try this method once. You also might surprise yourself, or at the least, you’ll come away with a better understanding of who you are as a writer.

Be sure to swing back by on Monday for the next chapter of The Last Unicorn  by Peter S. Beagle and how we can learn storytelling from the masters.

Happy writing!

Monday, July 7, 2014

The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle: Read, Chapter IX


Welcome back to this read of The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle. Here, we examine a book in depth to figure out what the author does to make it work. To catch up or review previous parts of this read or to see other books I’ve broken down for writing tips, click here.

Enjoy!

SPOILERS!

Chapter IX

Summary: Schmendrick, Molly, and the now-human unicorn come to King Haggard’s castle just before sunset the next day. Two guardsmen greet them in shabby, homemade armor, the younger fancying that the lady, who he doesn’t know is a unicorn, is something quite spectacular. The elder fancies her something not to be judged too quickly.

Yet they allow the three inside, believing the unicorn to be a girl named Lady Amalthea, when Schmendrick insists upon seeing Haggard. Through a great hall so vast the walls disappear and a winding stair that becomes narrower the higher you climb, they are taken to Haggard’s throne room. Behind them walks the younger guardsman who, unintentionally, mirrors the unicorn’s every movement.

In the throne room, the elder guardsman reveals himself as King Haggard and the younger as Prince Lir. Schmendrick and Molly are stunned, but Schmendrick quickly recovers and pleas to enter the king’s service. Haggard has no interest, for he will have nothing near him that does not make him happy. Besides, he already has a magician. Schmendrick, however, points out that his current magician does not make him happy, a fact that convinces the king to dismiss the man and take Schmendrick on instead. He decides that, as great magic has ceased to please him, perhaps a bumbling fool of a magician will make him happy.

The old magician, in a rage, conjures an evil wind that makes even Haggard retreat. But in the midst of it, the Lady Amalthea turns, the spot on her forehead glowing, and the wind departs. With it, the old magician’s anger fades and he begins laughing, predicting that Haggard has let his own doom through his front door. He leaves then without argument.

Haggard demands to know who Amalthea really is, and Schmendrick invents a story about her being his niece, but the king will not be lied to regarding her. He demands truth. Molly and Schmendrick come up short, for they cannot tell the king her true identity. Lir, however, comes to her rescue, insisting that it doesn’t matter. After all, she is here. The king lets the question go.

He assigns Molly as his cook, maidservant, scullery maid, and scrubwoman. But he bars the Lady Amalthea from nothing. She unsettles him because he sees green leaves and small animals in her eyes, but each time he demands to know what she looks at and she replies the sea, he calms. He too thinks the sea is good.

After Haggard leaves, Lir offers to get Amalthea whatever she needs, including satin to make a gown. “Let me help you,” he says (page 147).

Writer Comments: This chapter plays with reader expectations when it comes to King Haggard. Most of us, when we imagine a king of any sort, picture riches, luxury, and castles teeming with servants. But Haggard is none of these things. He plays sentry at his own castle, wears cobbled together armor, has nothing of luxury, no servants, and is content with nothing. Too, Beagle utilizes careful storytelling to avoid revealing that the guardsmen are the king and prince themselves until Schmendrick and Molly learn such. The surprise is fun, but it’s also a tricky bit of chicanery.

On the other hand, Haggard is exactly what one might expect from an evil king. He is harsh, demanding, surly, dismissive of everyone, and his eyes are the color of the Bull. He insists on always getting his way. In this, Beagle both plays to reader expectations, yet also inverts them. This is what makes Haggard interesting.

Further, Beagle grants his readers something to sympathize with. Haggard is unhappy and wants nothing more than to be surrounded by things that make him happy. Is that not a human desire we all possess? Even while Haggard is clearly a blight, he is one we can connect with. And yet the simplest thing, looking at the sea, seems to please Haggard. That too we can grasp. After all, isn’t it the simple things that usually make us most content: a welcoming hug from a loved one, the smell of our favorite food cooking, a beautiful sunset.

In this chapter, though, Haggard is only one of two main characters introduced. Beagle uses Prince Lir quite differently. Lir is the contrast of Haggard. He is polite and kindhearted--remarkable considering who his father is. Lir, Molly realizes, is the bored prince who waited with the princess who tried calling the unicorn many chapters back. Yet here he is without that princess, as drab and unfitting as his father. But Lir possesses a whimsical aspect that starkly contrasts with Haggard’s brooding castle and mien.

More, Lir is a character undergoing epic change. He is not so much of a part as Schmendrick, Molly, or the unicorn, but by the unicorn’s very presence, he begins to grow from something dull and simple to something greater. She inspires within him a desire to please himself rather than the father he could never make happy. She inspires him to write poetry when he never had before. In short, his and the unicorn’s meeting is a moment of transformation, a common enough event in fantasy and fairy tale, but one that results in heroes and the examination of humanity.

From a purely logical standpoint, this transformation may seem a bit far fetched, but in many other regards, it’s quite expected. Love, after all, even in our real life experience can make people behave quite oddly. Beagle merely adds a unicorn’s presence to the mix and epicfies the transformation. Fantasy allows for this. Being aware of the tropes, expectations, and allowances of your genre is vital.

Beyond these broader approaches, I’d like to take a quick look at two other things Beagle uses in his writing.

First is onomatopoeia. In the opening of this chapter, he has birds on the shore call out,  “Saidso,” (page 130). Normally, we’d expect a standard onomatopoeia like caw or shrieking. Yet Beagle invents his own, combining two real words to roughly imitate the sound of a bird. This is his prerogative as an author--yes, we invent our own words on occasion--but it encourages that sense of blurring boundaries and magic in the setting. Too, it triggers that part of us that sometimes almost hears our own language in the world around us. Don’t go overboard with invented words--in other words, do this rarely--but don’t feel like, as a writer, you are limited to only the words in the dictionary.

Another technique Beagle utilizes is vivid verbs. Consider this line:

They crossed a cobbled courtyard where cold laundry groped their faces (page 134)

“Groped” is an extremely vivid verb. It implies a great deal and brings with it an uncomfortable sensation, and that’s all in one syllable. Beagle could have chosen verbs like hit, brush, smacked, or something plainer. However, they would not have carried such impact. They might have been okay, but they wouldn’t have been just right. It may take many drafts to decide on that perfect word, that verb that so vividly imparts and image or sensation, but when editors ask you to punch up your verbs, this is what they mean.

Thank you for joining me for today’s chapter of The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle. We’ll resume this read next Monday. Until then, swing back by on Friday for further forays in fiction, the speculative, and life.